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#1 Guest_The_1ron_lung

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Posted 13 February 2005 - 06:38 AM

Posted Imageis it any good.. i got PS literally 20-25 minutes ago and i went to work.. i love the brushes..so many choices my fav is the "texture with brush" please tell me if its ok for a first..
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Posted 13 February 2005 - 06:41 AM

The font doesn't stick out to much is to plain. Try adding a 1 pixel stroke around it. The little cross thing seems to have no purpouse as far as i'm concerned. Meh... good for your first try. 5.75/10
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Posted 13 February 2005 - 06:45 AM

lol i give it 4/10 but its a first try
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Posted 13 February 2005 - 06:46 AM

ya the font is too plain, the render is a bit weird..ehhe...but ya, for a first, its not bad..
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Posted 13 February 2005 - 06:48 AM

4/10 background needs major work so does the text and the render is weird
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Posted 13 February 2005 - 07:08 AM

well this is the render i used.. Posted Imagethe i inverted it and used CENOBYTE font on the fore head
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Posted 13 February 2005 - 07:28 AM

The font is very plain. Use some blending effects on it to make it stand out.
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Posted 13 February 2005 - 09:11 AM

Font and background need work. Don't invert the render, it looks really bad and weird IMO.
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Posted 13 February 2005 - 09:46 AM

that target looks wrongreal wrong
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Posted 13 February 2005 - 02:20 PM

Font really, really sux and pic tooBackground is good but...3/10
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Posted 13 February 2005 - 02:33 PM

OK for starters...Get rid of the target. change the font. & why is the render color inverted?edit: or keep the sig u have now.

Edited by 2003raptor, 13 February 2005 - 02:34 PM.

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Posted 13 February 2005 - 05:27 PM

It's ... terrible. 2/10 The font doesn't stand out enough, the background is... not worth being mentionedAND: Why the hell is the render inverted ? It looks :puke:The target is kinda annoying, too.Sorry if I've been too harsh but that's how it is.But don't worry if it's your first one - just keep trying and you'll get better :P
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