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#1 Guest_k0r4y

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Posted 14 May 2008 - 08:32 PM

Meh, I like the b/w version MUUUUUCH more. ;)Posted ImagePosted ImagePS; I suck with vectors ;)

Edited by k0r4y, 14 May 2008 - 09:47 PM.

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#2 Genevance

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Posted 14 May 2008 - 09:06 PM

B/W is better than the colored one. The background isn't that good. Could have added a little more work on it. The text should be near the light source or render. That wave thing is also weird. Not bad.
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#3 DownShift

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Posted 14 May 2008 - 11:10 PM

Stock looks low quality, and I would like to see a more clearly defined focal. Lighting is definitely forced here as well.
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Posted 15 May 2008 - 07:21 AM

She's too far off to the side and the text there is entirely too blended in to take control of the space you've left.
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Posted 15 May 2008 - 11:38 PM

Pretty much what stock said, Move the render towards the middle and make her just a bit bigger.
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