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Posted 29 June 2008 - 06:21 AM

Posted Image:< I can't believe what is happening. Anyway c&C
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#2 Genevance

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Posted 29 June 2008 - 10:13 AM

The focal is somewhat disturbed. Also, the text isn't good.
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Posted 29 June 2008 - 11:05 AM

I was going for latest Doctor Who logo without the ellipse. I was also going for that advert look, but it does seem like he isn't the focal.
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Posted 29 June 2008 - 03:20 PM

Yea the composition of the other renders need work but the text is really annoying me the most. Getting rid of that glowing Earth or moving it closer to the focal or something like that and getting rid of that bright thing next to the text would really help the composition cause those are really the brightest things on the canvas.
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Posted 01 July 2008 - 07:07 PM

:< I'm kind of sick of the Daleks now.But anyway, the sig is overcrowded and the arrangement doesn't flow very well. It makes it look like you've just smacked some images onto a spacey background. Text.. not so good either. + points for Tennant though ^_^
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