i know my design not good ~~ but please show me where my weakness thx alot (sorry for my broken english~
those are my design please give comment thx
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, Jul 18 2008 08:05 AM
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Guest_loveucan
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Posted 18 July 2008 - 08:05 AM
i know my design not good ~~ but please show me where my weakness thx alot (sorry for my broken english~
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Posted 18 July 2008 - 02:44 PM
I think the main problem with your artwork is the text. They stick out way too much. I suggest hiding the text, or at least making it more simpler, would be good. The portraits and shots you have are really good. Try improving on text placement, and toning down your animations just a bit. 
( Chinese Translation lol wut )我认为主要问题与您的艺术品是文本。 他们伸出太多。 我建议掩藏文本，或者至少使它更加简单，是好。 您有的画像和射击是真正地好。 设法改善在文本安置和降低调子您的动画位。 (Japanese Translation WTF AM I DOING?)私はあなたのアートワークとの主要な問題がテキストであることを考える。 それらはあまりを突き出る。 私はテキストを隠すことを提案するまたは少なくともそれをより簡単にさせることは、よい。 あなたが持っている打撃および肖像画は実際によい。 テキストの配置で改良し、あなたの生気を和らげる試みちょうどビット。 :)Im so nice.
( Chinese Translation lol wut )我认为主要问题与您的艺术品是文本。 他们伸出太多。 我建议掩藏文本，或者至少使它更加简单，是好。 您有的画像和射击是真正地好。 设法改善在文本安置和降低调子您的动画位。 (Japanese Translation WTF AM I DOING?)私はあなたのアートワークとの主要な問題がテキストであることを考える。 それらはあまりを突き出る。 私はテキストを隠すことを提案するまたは少なくともそれをより簡単にさせることは、よい。 あなたが持っている打撃および肖像画は実際によい。 テキストの配置で改良し、あなたの生気を和らげる試みちょうどビット。 :)Im so nice.
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Posted 18 July 2008 - 04:44 PM
yeah that really really my weakness !! got many pro like u all also tell me my text still need to be improve!thx thx u so much , u really help me much !! thx!I think the main problem with your artwork is the text. They stick out way too much. I suggest hiding the text, or at least making it more simpler, would be good. The portraits and shots you have are really good. Try improving on text placement, and toning down your animations just a bit.
thx thx i will hardly improve my text from now on !!! thx !!!Yeah, the text is really a problem. Also, the effects are simple, but the concept is nice.
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Guest_Amayo
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Posted 18 July 2008 - 05:07 PM
Well, Im glad that we could assist you
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Posted 18 July 2008 - 05:10 PM
Need nature idea, but the text as said before really needs to be smaller and hidden, but I like the idea you have.
