Lyrics written to post-grunge metal (comment as you please)(Slow)I don't wanna dieSo alone insideLet me be with youI will make your dreams come true(Fast)Stop being the siren that you areCan't you even see what it's doing to me?I've barely controlled myself thus farOh, how I need to make you seeThat these emotions I must resistOnly succumb to a withering blissThis torture can only be relievedIf you let me into your world...(Slow)I don't wanna dieNot prepared to fallThe siren that's insideCan't escape it's callI don't wanna dieSo alone insideLet me be with youI will make your dreams come true(Fast)But the world would never let us beIf we were together, you and meClashes of culture and personas that cannot mixMight as well float down the River StyxYour shrill screams I can barely takeBut I'll still pursue you besides the stakesIt's just your beauty that I knowNeed to see what lies below...You on high rocks, me in the seaGasping for air, can barely breathYour smooth face, your deep, black eyesGaze before me as I slowly dieBut I just want you, so I just fightOnly seeing you, ignoring the light(Slow)I don't wanna dieNot prepared to fallThe sire that's insideCan't escape it's callI don't wanna dieSo alone insideLet me be with youI will make your dreams come true(that's all i got)
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Posted 20 January 2010 - 02:50 PM
Oh that was good.
That's really good man.Keep posting it and maybe I'll join you soon.You will notice a few peoples poems somewhere Here.I'll find it for you.Found it.
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Posted 21 January 2010 - 06:40 AM
Oh god, you do not know how happy it makes me to know that some one likes my lyrics. Thanks man and thank you for the reference.
Oh that was good.
That's really good man.Keep posting it and maybe I'll join you soon.You will notice a few peoples poems somewhere Here.I'll find it for you.Found it.
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Posted 21 January 2010 - 07:13 PM
I can't write 
Just not that kind of creative mind,Well If i vould i would post some back at you and we could have a poetic conversations like the ancient indians?they were rather strange but very poetic. Extremely hard poems with 3 meanings per line 
Just not that kind of creative mind,Well If i vould i would post some back at you and we could have a poetic conversations like the ancient indians?they were rather strange but very poetic. Extremely hard poems with 3 meanings per line
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Posted 02 February 2010 - 05:25 AM
wowwwwww that part is niceI don't wanna dieNot prepared to fallThe siren that's insideCan't escape it's callbut my fav is thisBut the world would never let us beIf we were together, you and meClashes of culture and personas that cannot mixMight as well float down the River StyxYour shrill screams I can barely takeBut I'll still pursue you besides the stakesSICKKKKK!
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Posted 09 February 2010 - 07:28 PM
This is pretty good!! I like it. Do you have any instrumental parts, guitar or otherwise, written for it yet? I'd love to hear it, even if only as a demo. 
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Posted 21 February 2010 - 07:52 AM
Hey guys, thanx for the comments! Yes, I do have musical instruments in mind, just have to remember how to work MixCraft hahaNew lyrics to a new song:Masks I WearThe mask of the best friendIs self-inflictionAnd a curse on meBagged and tagged by yourHasty decisionsYou’ve just let me beObserve a new insightThis relationship of you and ICan't be stopped, it must go onI’ll rip this mask offAnd show you what lies inside'Cause all I want is youNothing less than yoursBut these masks that I wearKeep me from my goal(Too nice to leave, too nice to keep)The mask of the thug wasThe one you wantedMe to always wearHurt and burned by yourHate decisionsBut I was always thereI went through the raverThrough the lover and the haterPlus the martyr and the punkAlso the spaz so full of spunkAnd the best friend...Oh, the best friend...Observe a new insightThis relationship of you and IIs poisoned through and throughBy things I say and doI'll rip this mask offAnd show you what lies inside'Cause all I want is youNothing less than yoursBut these that I wearKeep me from my goal(Too sweet to leave, too sweet to keep)What could you possibly wantFrom a guy so blindTo the things that you yearnAnd the image I can't findIf simulacrums of angelsDidn't matter allWe'd be togetherNot stuck in a fallI can be so much moreThan you ever thought beforeI will be good to youIf you'd only let me throughJust ask yourselfDo I really have chanceDon't let me stay the best friend...'Cause all I want is youNothing less than yoursBut these masks that I wearKeep me from my goal(Too loving to leave, maybe enough to keep)I like Sirens better myself, but this was made personally to a girl i like. note: a lot of the syllables are stressed for rhythm
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Posted 26 February 2010 - 05:21 AM
Man, that's pretty good. I would say it's a little too repetitive at some times. I write poems when I'm bored and one day I came across Shakespearean sonnets. Here's one of the sonnets I did back in eigth grade:What lies under the waves of the ocean?Surely where all hopes sank to the bottom.Past conqerors saliling with devotion,the winds tell the story of all of them.Seashells, tangible evidence of hardship,Past becoming legacy of the future.Shells and rocks holding legends of friendship,Becoming today's long lost literature.Sand is what the turbulent waves leave behind,Covering up the treasures of history.Each grain of sand, so one of a kind,What resides beneath is a mystery.Will these mysteries every be recovered?And will that day every come for it to be discovered?Sonnets aren't that rhythmic at all; my sonnet came across my head-I just took what I could think of and that is what I used. It took me an hour or so... I'm not creative like you are, and I do not have a poetic mind.As I said, this poem isn't meant to be put to music; it's only to be recited, although I think it really wasn't good at all, but hey, I sound like Shakespeare, although it wasn't even comparable with his "Shall I compare thee"
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Posted 24 March 2010 - 01:17 AM
More lyrics lol:To Have No NameWhat a shameTo deny a nameFor the only oneWho'd ever play the gameTo win your heartBe your other partWhen no one elseWould even think to startAll he asks is for one danceGive this lad a fighting chanceTo live a life right by your sideForever love you and never dieSo just get off your high horseLet this continue its courseHe's uncorrupted by your fameThen again, he has no nameIt is a shameTo entreat the nameOf an innocent girlLooking for the sameWhile all your liesLead to demiseWhen your saviorStands before your eyesAll he asks is for one danceGive this lad a fighting chanceTo live a life right by your sideForever love you and never dieSo just get off your high horseLet this continue its courseHe's uncorrupted by your fameThen again, he has no nameWhat a shameI have no nameWhen everyone elseRemain the sameWhen angels singI'll spread my wingsShow you and allI can be anythingI'm done with this gameDone with false claimsI will take control andCreate my own nameAnd the sonnet was very good, intensely provocative in my opinion 
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Posted 13 June 2010 - 04:56 PM
kind of emo-grunge to me, but for lyrics wise.. I give you 3 thumbs up!! 1 for me and 2 for my friend..If you want to have an idea what music accompany this lyrics should have I'll give it a fast paced drum beat with melodic picking of guitars with slow overdrive crunch guitar chord beaters.. =DGood job, and yeah I came from the poetry thread cause you post a link there.. and for my opinion most lyrics, in figures 70% of them is an art poetry.. Many people just can't realized it..
"When I quote others I do so in order to express my own ideas more clearly.."
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Posted 14 June 2010 - 03:31 AM
These are making me sad. But they're very good! Do you play in a band, or do you just enjoy writing lyrics?
But they're very good! Do you play in a band, or do you just enjoy writing lyrics?
